migrating birds --
all the colors of
my skin
--Angie Werren, USA
Migration introduces in a powerful way, this haiku of variety and sameness; though the mood reminds me of Michael Dylan Welch's famous 'tulip festival' haiku, still, it presents a freshness of idea and quality. Its transcending quality skews into a methaphorical realm; yet it retains the simplicity and exactness of its Asian genre.
There is the expansiveness that is of the continent of Africa, with its varieties of tribes, clans, cultural practises; yet the "skin" of the connotative Africa becomes a hope of humanity and a universality of borders.
Like a skilful haiku magician, she dips into the hat, and pull the surprise out of nature "migrating birds"
Well done Angie
--gillena cox
Caribbean Kigo Kukai - founder/coordinator
The theme for the Kukai #45 was afrocentric
Thursday, October 3, 2013
afrocentric
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thank you, Gillena!
ReplyDeleteI'm humbled by your commentary -- and I absolutely adore that image of dipping into the hat and pulling out birds. wonderful!!
thank you again.
angie
Again, congrats on your winning CCK #45
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Interesting observation!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by Betty
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