again she blossoms
under the sakura
-Brendon Kent, England
A really nice juxtaposition, in Lines One and Three, The appeal to our sense of sight is honed, in a very pleasant and celebratory manner. The festivity of sakura blooming and the coy innocence of blowing gum is nicely pitted against each other. What could follow pink bubblegum? Really anything under the sun. However Brendon surprises us with a burst of blossoms which we will understand to be pink
Well done Brendon
--gillena cox
Caribbean Kigo Kukai - founder/coordinator
haiku prompt pink bubblegum
revisit the results of this kukai
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