Autumn, with its paradoxical harvesting and withering, resonnates Lines One and Three 'wreath' and 'feeds' while Line Three pivots well Lines One and Two.
This haiku can be graphically presented as a circle; which crafts very well, the use of the kigo 'wreath'
autumn wreath
the dried sunflower
feeds a blackbird
--Marleen Hulst; The Netherlands
Well done Marleen
--gillena cox
coordinator; Caribbean Kigo Kukai

The theme for the kukai, was 'wreath'
An eloquent comment on a fine haiku.
ReplyDeleteYout cherries look delightful and irresistible:)
ReplyDeleteI also like your comment on the beautiful haiku by Marleen!
Thanks for your visit and nice words you left on my blog:)
Hugs
Joo
Bill, Joo, thanks for your encouragement; much love...
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