only cup of tea
warms my hands
--Jacek Margolak; Poland
¸.•**•. ♥ ♥ ¸.•**•.¸
late Valentine's day –
the beggar still hums
an old love song
--Cezar-Florian Ciobîca; Romania
Both Jacek and Cezar have progressed the physical dimensions, in their co-winning haiku; they agree by intimation of the warming that love can bring; even though they both absent the much purported lover of the day. Space and time absorb both writers in their love contemplation; prescribed for this day.
Jacek achieves this in 12 and Cezar in 14 syllables.
Jacek provokes the touch sense, while Cezar appeals to memory.
There is a profound resonance in Cezar's poem by his skillful choice of 'late in Line 1 and 'still' in Line 2; love is lost but cunningly capsuled.
In Jacek's poem love's warmth is cleverly juxtaposed.
They both narrate a sad reality of the much sort after love; so much so, its given this international appeal.
Well done Jacek and Cezar
--gillena cox
coordinator; Caribbean Kigo Kukai
the theme of the kukai wasValentine's Day
