my mother's mistakes
no longer mine
--Shloka Shankar, India
Shloka writes in a contemplative mood here, she is drawn to a simple writing tool which transports her in meditative phase to dwell on past, present and future generations; actions, residues, errors and solutions.This haiku intimates action while remaining in a dormant state. Her eraser filled with innate power is never set to work in the poem, not withstanding, its potential remains to fulfil the requirement of the prompt, for our fifty third kukai. This she accomplishes, mijikai style, with eleven syllables, presented in the three line form.
Well done Shloka
--gillena cox
Caribbean Kigo Kukai - founder/coordinator
Haiku prompt "reflection" revisit the results for this kukai
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